The Jersey Shore In June

Jersey Shore was where my family picnicked every year
Under the weeping willow with a spraying fountain near
Nineteen ninety-eight we saw a bald eagle fly west
Eagles always soar that time of year to their nest
Though it was a chilly June we swam in the reverie 
Encompassed in frigid waters, we still enjoyed our family
Elated we ate sandwiches and drank fresh lemonade
Needing each other with laughter as in the sun we laid
This tradition became a yearly custom in early afternoon
Holding on the memories of the Jersey Shore in June



Juneteenth Contest
Edward Ibeh
July 7, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 10:22 PM
Congratulations on your win. Creative and different. I like rhyming acrostics. Well done!
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July 16, 2018 at 12:27 AM
Congratulations and best wishes for your win with this wonderful Acrostic, Luloo - blessings and keep up the great work! :-)
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July 15, 2018 at 10:42 PM
Laura, very nice. Glad to see I'm not only one did not associate as others.Congrats!
Ibeh Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Thank you so much for entering my debut contest, Laura!:-) Congratulations on your fine win! Amazing acrostic!
Man Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 10:05 PM
Lovely acrostic, Laura!
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