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The Jerk

With booze he plies her; then lies as he sighs, "Love you." With lies he plies her; but flies when she sighs, "Love you." * Couldn't decide which...

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Date: 8/17/2011 11:44:00 PM
Great job with these two. I think they go together
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Date: 8/14/2011 7:04:00 PM
My dear rooster, just like a man! And women are so gullible, me among them. Great insight here.
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Date: 8/14/2011 3:11:00 PM
Both of them are great entry... John .. a jerk in formal.. thanks for sharing... p.d.
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Date: 8/14/2011 1:54:00 AM
Situation normal, lies right,crys incite, nope wrong, tonite
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Date: 8/11/2011 7:08:00 PM
both appropriately funny!! enjoyed!! perception is in the receptors.
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