The Jerk

With booze he plies 
her; then lies as 
he sighs, "Love you."  

With lies he plies 
her; but flies when 
she sighs, "Love you."  

  * Couldn't decide which...
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Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2011 at 11:44 PM
Great job with these two. I think they go together
Wesley Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 7:04 PM
My dear rooster, just like a man! And women are so gullible, me among them. Great insight here.
A   Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Both of them are great entry... John .. a jerk in formal.. thanks for sharing... p.d.
Johnson Avatar
August 14, 2011 at 1:54 AM
Situation normal, lies right,crys incite, nope wrong, tonite
Culverhouse Avatar
August 11, 2011 at 7:08 PM
both appropriately funny!! enjoyed!! perception is in the receptors.
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