The Jar

The vine explodes
in a snake-like embrace
upon the wall.
Thank heavens for the jar beneath it!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
October 17, 2013 at 8:23 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this creative work today..Sara
Comporozos Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 9:28 AM
Short and condensed, full of both understandable and unexplored meaning. Excellent! Congrats!
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August 25, 2013 at 12:28 PM
WOW! the shortest piece. great writing and more power to you>>>>>>>>HENSHAW<<<<<
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