David Mohn Poet Triolet

The Ivy Swirls

No soul remains to tend their rest
    Between two names, the ivy swirls
     So long ago, a love was blessed
    No soul remains to tend their rest
  Long centuries have greenly dressed
 Forgotten smiles and whispered pearls
    No soul remains to tend their rest
    Between two names, the ivy swirls

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Sara Kendrick October 14, 2016 at 11:13 AM I like the flow, rhythm, and the rhyme in this winner..Good to see it on the winners' list..Congrats..Sara

James Inman October 10, 2016 at 12:00 PM A lovely Triolet David.

Constance La France October 10, 2016 at 10:21 AM David, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Beautiful Scars October 9, 2016 at 11:35 AM wonderful triolet David...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison September 26, 2016 at 4:59 PM I am not a great fan of the triolet form and rarely comment but I make an exception with this fabulous poem David - the form really suits the subject. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Paul Callus September 26, 2016 at 10:52 AM You made good and clever use of this form, David! I love the content, and would love to see this one on the winners' list. Regards // paul