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The Ivy Swirls

No soul remains to tend their rest
    Between two names, the ivy swirls
     So long ago, a love was blessed
    No soul remains to tend their rest
  Long centuries have greenly dressed
 Forgotten smiles and whispered pearls
    No soul remains to tend their rest
    Between two names, the ivy swirls

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2016 11:13:00 AM

I like the flow, rhythm, and the rhyme in this winner..Good to see it on the winners' list..Congrats..Sara

James Inman

Date: 10/10/2016 12:00:00 PM

A lovely Triolet David.

Constance La France

Date: 10/10/2016 10:21:00 AM

David, congratulations on your win in my contest ~

Lu Loo

Date: 10/9/2016 11:35:00 AM

wonderful triolet David...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 4:59:00 PM

I am not a great fan of the triolet form and rarely comment but I make an exception with this fabulous poem David - the form really suits the subject. Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7

Paul Callus

Date: 9/26/2016 10:52:00 AM

You made good and clever use of this form, David! I love the content, and would love to see this one on the winners' list. Regards // paul