The Isle of Innisfree

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Without doubt a small isle but one of natural beauty
Such a tranquil emerald place, the Isle of Innisfree
Set in Irelands Lough Gill in the County of Sligo
And holds for me fond memories of so long ago. 

I met my first love at the loughs shore, a pretty colleen
Grace Ann was her name and she was just sixteen
And that first long hot summer that we spent together
Still plays on my mind and the love we had for each other.

We'd row across to the Isle often and stay all day long
And spent many hours talking and singing our song
A pact we both made, that we'd be together for life
I as her loving husband and she as my loving wife.

We'd dream of building a house there, just her and me
And later we'd have children, our very own family
We would have a laugh about that, it was just fantasy
But I knew that we'd be happy wherever we'd be.

We finished school in September and were waiting to see
If we'd been successful in our application, for Dublin Uni
Sadly, some of our friends, had their application's rejected
But Grace and I'd been lucky because we'd been accepted.

The week before our departure , she went with some friends to town
And as they crossed a busy road, a drunk driver mowed them down
Two of her friends were slightly injured but Grace died at the scene
Her young life taken from her; she'd  just turned seventeen.

I became very withdrawn and just wished it'd been me
And lost interest in everything and even a place at uni
I went to the funeral home to see, one last time her pretty face
And there in a white coffin lay an angel; my beautiful Grace.

I blamed myself for her death; she'd wanted to stay in with me
But I said "Go out with your friends and have a farewell party"
After her funeral I left for England and joined the merchant navy
In the hope I'd leave behind memories of that awful tragedy.

I couldn't face going back home and its now been thirty years
Just the thought of going back there would fill my eyes with tears
In my free time I'd go up on deck and just stare out to sea
And my mind would drift back to that summer, with Grace and Innisfree.


Written 11th December 2020.

Inspired by The Lake Isle Of Innisfree by Irish Poet W. B. Yeats

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 12/20/2020 5:54:00 PM
Tom you had me with this heartfelt piece. Very convincing my friend. Well written as though it really happened your emotions in this piece were felt by me excellent piece.
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Date: 12/21/2020 5:45:00 AM
Thank you very much Michael, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 12/17/2020 4:35:00 PM
Great story telling of a tragic tale. Wish there had been a happier ending but life does not always give that. Excellent and emotional write Tom, Emilia.
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Date: 12/18/2020 12:17:00 AM
Thank you very much Emilia, I got the inspiration from the music, you're right though not every story has a happy ending. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 12/16/2020 5:53:00 AM
A captivating tragic story that stirs the emotions and creates a hurricane of grief! I read in the comments that it is not true but I know for a fact that many similar stories are true including one in Montreal, Canada where the bride was killed by a car, right after the ceremony as she was crossing the street. Superb narrative ability, my friend Tom!
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Date: 12/16/2020 6:46:00 AM
Thank you very much Demetrios, that was so tragic for her family, we just never know whats around the corner in our lives. Tom
Date: 12/16/2020 4:48:00 AM
The storyteller inside of you definitely took over in this poem, Tom! So many emotions here; what a sad and tragic ending! Best regards, my friend. // paul
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Date: 12/16/2020 6:44:00 AM
Thank you very much Paul, we just don't know when tragedy might strike in our lives, it can be devastating. Hope you're well. Tom
Date: 12/14/2020 9:25:00 PM
A very moving and beautifully told story Tom. I am so glad to know it is fictional. I have been to Yeats country and visited his gravesite. It made his poems seem so alive seeing some of his haunts! Bravo for this amazing poem! Blessings xxoo
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Date: 12/15/2020 2:00:00 AM
Thank you very much Connie, it is a beautiful part of the world, its a haunting song that I used for a family slide show and it inspired me. I hope you are well. Tom
Date: 12/14/2020 10:37:00 AM
gosh, i was thinking it was true because of all the modern details to it. Very well done, Tom. So sad but so beautifully written.
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Date: 12/14/2020 10:41:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, sadly with Christmas looming there will be similar tragedies around the world. Tom
Date: 12/14/2020 8:58:00 AM
Glad to hear it’s fiction (for you) loved the story...though a sad one.
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Date: 12/14/2020 10:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Kim, its a haunting piece of music, and I thought I'd try and write a poem around it. Yeats used to spend a lot of time there. The music you might recognise, it was the theme from The Quiet Man. Tom
Date: 12/14/2020 5:50:00 AM
- A wonderful love story that ends so tragically, Tom - A heartbreaking poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/14/2020 7:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne, sadly this time of year many drink drive and inflict misery on others. Tom
Date: 12/13/2020 8:25:00 PM
Tom, it is clear that your love for her has been one that will not ever leave you. I have had similar thoughts and written about them as well. Perhaps it is the only way we can help ourselves over the pain. Great write about the burden you have carried. It was not your fault, so forgive yourself and keep writing. -Dan
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Date: 12/14/2020 12:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Dan, although this is a fictional write I've heard about people who have found themselves in that situation. Thanks for your visit and comment. Tom
Date: 12/13/2020 6:33:00 PM
Hello Tom … a truly great poem of romance and tragedy. You’re story telling is great Tom - Lindsay
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Date: 12/14/2020 12:20:00 AM
Thank you very much Lindsay, Id heard the music many times and my muse took over. W. B. Yeats spent many happy times there. Tom
Date: 12/13/2020 5:49:00 PM
Wow, what a powerful and heartbreaking poem. Such a sad tragedy. I understand it completely and the 'survivor guilt' that comes with such a death. I love this poem you have written. Well done Tom! :)
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Date: 12/14/2020 12:19:00 AM
Thank you very much Heidi, im pleased that you enjoyed it. When tragedy strikes like that you always doubt yourself thinking what if I'd acted differently, could it have been prevented. Tom
Date: 12/13/2020 4:42:00 PM
Poor Grace! This makes me incredibly sad, but happy that these young people had each other and their hopes and dreams for a little while.
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Date: 12/14/2020 12:16:00 AM
Thank you Caren, no one ever knows whats in store, tragedy can strike in the blink of an eye. Tom
Date: 12/13/2020 4:29:00 PM
An awesome write, Tom, albeit so tragic and poignant. Remarkable poem! ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/14/2020 12:14:00 AM
Thank you very much Gershon, im happy that you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 12/13/2020 10:27:00 AM
Brilliant and beautiful story poem my friend. love it. Is it a real place?. Inspiring write. well done.
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Date: 12/13/2020 11:01:00 AM
Thank you very much Peter, im happy you enjoyed it. Yes it is, in Co Sligo and Yeats used to spend a lot of time there, he too wrote a poem The lake isle of innisfree. The music, the isle of innisfree was the theme for the Quiet man starring John Wayne. Tom
Date: 12/12/2020 7:49:00 PM
What a moving Poem. I am so sorry you lost Grace. So young you both were. This is a touching tale written by Poet with a heart. You are extremely good at this, Tom. Sorry, could not reply sooner.,,, Love, Grandma Pangie xx
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Date: 12/13/2020 12:07:00 AM
Thank you Panagiota, we all love happy endings but it's not always the case as many are going through heartbreak in their lives. Tom
Date: 12/11/2020 11:17:00 PM
One never forgets one's first love especially when tragedy hit you. A lovely heart breaking poem. ~~
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Date: 12/12/2020 12:57:00 AM
Thank you very much Victor, painful memories like that stay with you. Tom
Date: 12/11/2020 8:40:00 PM
Tom, Such a warm yarn you spin. I must admit I was done in by this wonderful tale. The likes of which made me beat a tactful retreat.., away from that lost summer in Innisfree. I tip my cap in earnest. -Richard
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Date: 12/12/2020 12:56:00 AM
Thank you Richard, im happy that you liked it. Tom
Date: 12/11/2020 3:32:00 PM
Oh Tom, this is so moving yet such a beautiful tribute poem in memory of your first love and The Isle of Innisfree. Warm wishes, Belle
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Date: 12/11/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thank you very much Belle, im happy that you liked it. Have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 12/11/2020 1:09:00 PM
Such a beautifully penned piece Tom, glad you said it was fictional as was beginning it was true. such good penning with fine imagery too. Have a great weekend, Gordon
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Date: 12/11/2020 1:59:00 PM
Thank you very much Gordon, im glad you enjoyed it, sometimes life is like that and endings aren't always happy ones. Tom
Date: 12/11/2020 12:27:00 PM
You are a wonderful story teller, Tom. Truly a beautiful isle you chose for the setting--your creative spirits soar in this write.
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Date: 12/11/2020 12:31:00 PM
Thank you very much Vijay, the music the isle of innisfree was the theme for that classic, the quiet man starring John Wayne.. Tom
Date: 12/11/2020 12:14:00 PM
hello Tom, this poem brought tears to my eyes as i read of her death. so sad. enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 12/11/2020 3:55:00 PM
Hello Tom, Thank you I am well. I hope you are to. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 12/11/2020 12:15:00 PM
Thank you very much Darlene, hope you are well. Tom
Date: 12/11/2020 11:42:00 AM
Hi Tom, You have penned such a sad story that pulled at the heartstrings. It sounds like it's a beautiful place to meet someone and fall I in love. Then out of nowhere an unfortunate tragedy happened. Tell me this is just you using your poetic pen. I hope this isn't true. If it is, I could understand why it's hard to go back there.I found it to be a well-written emotional write. PS, Enjoy your day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/11/2020 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, its a fictional write but the music I used in a family slide show was the inspiration for it and of course had to Google it. Hope you too have a lovely weekend. Tom
Date: 12/11/2020 11:36:00 AM
aww Tom you are a wonderful story teller and i thoroughly enjoyed this tale , I wasn't expecting the sad ending but a happy ever after:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/11/2020 11:56:00 AM
Thank you very much Jan, I'd used the music The Isle of Innisfree for a sideshow I done for our family reunion and of course googled it and my muse took over. William Butler Yeats used to spend a lot of time there and he too wrote a poem about it. Tom
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