The Islands Call

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Maui Tropical Arrangements from Fukushima Flowers

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*Image of Tropical Arrangements by FukuFlow. The Islands Call Hawaiian rainbow colored precious mixture of fine blooming fragrances that seizes both eyes and nose filled breaths of sweet nothings sealing fate forever bridging dreams illustrating life's gift at Paradise shores. 2022 December 16 *2nd Place* Writing Challenge - Yalto Form ~~Constance La France: Judged 2022 December 19 *HMS.

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Constance La France

Date: 1/2/2023 1:30:00 PM

Hilo, a lovely Yalto poem! And congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Yalto Form, well done, love the image too, Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/2/2023 2:04:00 PM

Thank you, Constance, for this fun challenge--a rare form for me. A belated Happy 2023 my friend, Aloha William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2022 10:52:00 AM

- Wish I was there... beautiful poem - Congratulations on your win :) - I wish you a Merry Christmas :) -

Hilo Poet
Date: 1/2/2023 2:01:00 PM

A belated word of thanks, Anne-Lise, and enjoy this wondrous 2023 my friend, Aloha William--without a doubt, I too would be envious of your home too!