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The poem "The Invitation" was born from a fleeting yet profound encounter with Angel, a woman who identifies as him, whose inner beauty radiated with such intensity that it reshaped my understanding of connection. Meeting him felt like a spark—electric and grounding, like lightning drawn to the earth. His presence, unguarded and authentic, revealed a depth that transcended physicality, touching something sacred within me. This poem is not about possessing or defining him but about honoring the quiet strength and hidden ache I glimpsed in his slowest smile. It’s an invitation to mutual vulnerability, a hope to share a space where silence speaks and love becomes a reciprocal act of worship, free from expectation. Angel reminded me that true beauty lies in the unguarded heart, and this poem is my attempt to capture that truth while respecting his essence and identity.

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"The Invitation" I saw you — like lightning notices the earth before it strikes. My breath forgot its rhythm, my eyes rehearsed what touch might feel like if permission ever passed between us. I want you — not just the body wrapped in moonlight, but the pulse beneath it, the places you’ve never let language reach. The ache you hide in your slowest smile. Can I take you to my love nest— not a place, but a promise? Where the sheets know silence, but the walls remember every gasp of discovery. Let me peel back time with my fingertips, teach your name to my mouth one syllable at a time, until want becomes worship and the hush between heartbeats says more than lips ever could. Make you mine? No— only if you ask me to be yours too.

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