The Inviolate

— Leave Is Sought, Never Usurped— He'd meant to heed the sermon, yet her air unwove his reason from its sacred thread; whilst Love, pronounced as heaven's sovereign prayer, burnt through his senses till the words lay dead. Her aureate presence held his gaze enthrall'd; the chalk hung mute beneath her lifted hand; each precept solemnly from heaven call'd fell like white cinders on enchanted sand. “Stand forth.” Beyond the hallow'd door he came, ear-grasp'd, whilst all his wayward senses swam; the bell released him from his chastening shame— then meek before the threshold: “May I come in, ma’am?” For love that knows its longing dare not claim, kneels at the door—and perishes unnamed.
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September 6, 2026 at 4:04 AM
A beautifully wrought devotional sonnet, where the sacred and sensual are held in exquisite tension. The elevated diction, disciplined rhyme, and culminating image of love kneeling at the threshold give the poem both emotional restraint and quiet tragedy—especially in that unforgettable final couplet.
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September 6, 2026 at 4:13 AM
Cherished Alison, 🌸 I am deeply grateful for your kind and discerning reading. Your generous attention to the delicate tension I was attempting between the sacred and the sensual, and to the quiet tragedy beneath the restraint, means more to me than I can adequately say. Thank you for reading my poor verse with such care and for discerning within it what I had hoped, however imperfectly, to convey. I receive your words with genuine humility and gratitude. May happiness, peace, and every gentle blessing find you abundantly, always. ✨
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