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The Invasion Pt1

They hovered above, in an awe of absolute silence. One would expect them to make a noise, as they changed shape, defying all human science. Nothing like how the movies portray them to be, You know a saucer shape with that familiar humming sound we always hear and see. No, they had an extraordinary solid metallic composition, That defied reasoning as they also, look like a watery substance in their transition. Their outer shell if you can call it that, shone like a brilliant white light, Yet without illuminating its surroundings, however, it hurt ones eye sight. There were hundreds of them reported floating all over the world’s skies, Watched in awe by every person’s eyes. The answer to whether there is life out there Brought a sense of death that caused a feeling of panic and despair Nevertheless, people stood there, looking up, as if rooted to the ground With this hypnotic stare, or as if trying to will the things to make a sound Then as if dripping out of the main ship were smaller round spheres That brought on people’s worst fears...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/18/2011 6:22:00 AM
I got shivers Sidney ! One of the best offbeat poems. You have an amazing writing skill...
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Date: 9/8/2011 9:20:00 AM
"Scary!" Very well described. You have a vivid imagination. Can't wait to read the other two.
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Date: 9/4/2011 3:27:00 PM
sm when you have a minute!!
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Date: 9/2/2011 8:34:00 AM
My worst fear is not an alien....it is .... guess what?? How are ya?? I think you will make it over to the eternal. Jesus can save ya and keep ya.
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Date: 8/31/2011 7:31:00 AM
creepy stuff.....thanks for stopping by my poetry!! Hope you are having a great day. I have to go to the school and talk to the teachers....woohoo!
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Date: 8/31/2011 5:52:00 AM
hey there Sid, what made you think I would forget you??? *foncused* how you doing? ps: I love this, heading over to part 2 :) love W
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