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The Intrigue of Fantasy

Saw you in a steamy dream You fit quite nicely in my scheme Of picture perfect high romance The rush of heat,that burning glance Lost in your eyes and all that jazz That catapulting razzmatazz Never knew love till I met you Forget the bad ones I've been through Yada yada having fun Pretending you're my only one Saying things of lust and love Like you've been sent from up above Like hold me close and don't let go You know I'm puttin' on a show! But now I'm caught upon a chasm Might have to let go of sarcasm I'm feeling quite a loss of power Best I take an ice-cold shower!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/24/2010 12:36:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one Deb only thing I would break the couplets up into sets of two ... I think it would give the words more impact ... but thats more a format thing ... nice work though I loved the poem LoveJayne x
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Date: 8/24/2010 12:36:00 AM
oppps forgot to rate sorry
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