The Intrigue of Fantasy

Saw you in a steamy dream
You fit quite nicely in my scheme
Of picture perfect high romance
The rush of heat,that burning glance
Lost in your eyes and all that jazz
That catapulting razzmatazz
Never knew love till I met you
Forget the bad ones I've been through
Yada yada having fun
Pretending you're my only one
Saying things of lust and love
Like you've been sent from up above
Like hold me close and don't let go
You know I'm puttin' on a show!
But now I'm caught upon a chasm
Might have to let go of sarcasm
I'm feeling quite a loss of power
Best I take an ice-cold shower!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Eggins Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 12:36 AM
oppps forgot to rate sorry
Eggins Avatar
August 24, 2010 at 12:36 AM
I really enjoyed this one Deb only thing I would break the couplets up into sets of two ... I think it would give the words more impact ... but thats more a format thing ... nice work though I loved the poem LoveJayne x
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