The Inside of Family

Sometimes there is togetherness,  
But other times everyone is busy and focused on their own paths.  
The one in turmoil is alone struggling through their darkest hours, 
The individual in distress is alone seeking a path to redemption,  
Messages go unanswered,  
Calls remain unreturned,
The one grappling with recurring challenges is deemed unserious,  
while the person battling their obstinate monsters is misunderstood.  
They walk a lonely road filled with hope,  
drawing strength from a family of friends and their own spirituality.


May 9, 2026.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Williams Avatar
May 26, 2026 at 7:59 PM
Thompson, thank you for your different take on this. I think there are elements of loneliness, feeling misunderstood, and searching for answers "outside" in many families. I appreciate the candor of your piece. Congrats on your top-five win! Blessings & very best, Bartholomew
Emate Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 7:19 PM
Thank you, Bartholomew for stopping by. I'm deeply honoured.
Dietrich Avatar
May 17, 2026 at 1:10 PM
Very astute look at families and the ups and downs. Congrats on your win
Emate Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 7:17 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I'm deeply honoured.
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