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The Indian Night

The crows sing Until you cover your eyes Crossed up in the night when the dead are living And I’m still sipping She walks away never forgetting Moved to the land of the strangers Finding joy in the simplest of lies The piece of you I had admired dies

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/22/2012 12:59:00 PM
I am stopping back today to see if you have continued to write and post new poetry Motion. I hope that you will continue with your writing. You have taken the first step~ ~to write and share. When you feel the need for inspiration read some of the other poetry here at PoetrySoup. It will help you. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:12:00 AM
Motion...how hauntingly moving...nice flow...I hope to read more from you...I like this...hugggsss~Deb~
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Date: 3/9/2012 6:15:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Motion. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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