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The Impossible Love

When I was walking around, I found a cat and sparrow There were almost playing, I thought the cat was tricking with that sparrow, And then will attack and eat her, However, nothing of my thoughts happened, I was surprised, as I watched them for long time The cat seemed happy with that bird, As he felt in love with her, They were playing as lovers exactly, It was a beautiful scene , I have ever seen ! But suddenly, the sparrow flew While the cat was looking at her , As he wanted to say don't go, I love you! But the sparrow seemed that she understood Understood the differences between them, As it is impossible for both of them to live together, Despite they love each other, I was sad about the end of their love story , It is hard for the lovers to desperate because Because of their differences ! And that is the impossible love!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/8/2016 7:59:00 AM
Greetings Sara. Congrats for having your poem featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!!! ;-)
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Date: 6/23/2016 10:43:00 PM
Sara, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/16/2016 11:21:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Sara. :)
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Sara Ibrahim
Date: 6/16/2016 11:52:00 AM
That so kind of you :) thank u so much and nice to meet you
Date: 6/15/2016 10:59:00 PM
Another nice and awesome Rant, Sara,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Sara Ibrahim
Date: 6/16/2016 6:46:00 AM
First of all, I would like to appreciate u SKAT :) it is very nice to receive some nice comments from nice people LIKE YOU especially I am just a recent user in Poetry Soup, and I would be so happy to have a friend like u here , thank u again :) my best regards, SARA

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