The Illusion of Free Will

What of "Free-Will," of which the prophets foretold?
A cruel little lie, bore of simple human design,
are our minds even capable, of the power to choose?
Or, are we blind sheep, being herded by the flock,
wrangled all together, just to be finally led astray?

Humankind seems to crave its own subjugation!
Of Religion, For Government, In our feeble little minds.
Freedom simply an illusion, another comforting lie,
Each generation complacent of their forefather's status quo.
Power firmly remains, with the few perched at the top.
The Bourgeoisie become Earth's largest congregation.

Even after centuries, not the slightest shift of balance.
Question their authority, get quickly stricken down.
"Destiny," their creation, to keep us silent and contained,
nothing remains left to the luxury of chance or fate.
Billions now brainwashed, mindless and obedient drones,
enslaved to do their bidding, our Government's mules.

Even God didn't foresee, how far we would fall.
Blindly praising institutions constructed by fellow man,
forgetting his firm warning, not to worship false idols.
Man bows to the Government, its holiest of incarnations.
Regardless their definition, they all share the blame,
from out-of-date Monarchies, to refined Democracies.
All Function reliant, on man's unquestioned allegiance. 

The consequence of opposition, capital punishment,
Yet, countless remain quiet and vigilant.
Coup d'etat and revolution, tools of a forgotten past.
Our future now more uncertain, then ever before.
A millennium of suffering, bounded in servitude,
Man it seems, will inevitably rule itself into submission.

Man alone granted freedom from a previously destined fate,
God's one and only creation, blessed of inherent "Free-Will."
Appreciation long forgot, now boastful and full of arrogance,
forsaking, the very essence of our human existence.
Taking for granted, even the gift of life in it self.
Our lives spent as slaves, to God's born of flesh and blood,
voluntarily submitting, to every Politician's new command.

Society's first rulers, who our ancestors surrendered control,
remain ruling still, bringing even evolution to a sudden halt.
The Great Human civilization continues into its decline.
Man's final hope, lay beyond the grasp of our mortal reach,
gone until, God reclaims his authority, as sole ruler of man.
Will glory finally be restored to our failed Utopic land?
Or due divine justice, will final judgment now commence?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/23/2016 7:59:00 PM
Excellent write. I am not a fan of government or religion, both in my opinion are toxic. If god was real, and had all seeing eyes he/she/it would have foreseen that humankind would fail miserably ! We are all slaves to the System, and freedon is a lie, not one of us is truly free. We are ourselves a domesticated species controlled through government, religion and sport and entertainment. I apologise for the long ramble.
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Lenny Gazbowski
Date: 4/24/2016 11:32:00 AM
Anthony, its refreshng to meet a fellow poet who is on the same page. There is some good news in that many are waking up to the fact that something is seriously wrong with our species ! Its not too late for positive change, but I endorse the words of Krishnamurti - ' A New Consciousness is required'.
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Anthony Guccia
Date: 4/23/2016 10:05:00 PM
I totally agree. That is exactly what this poem is trying to illustrate. I use an example from the biker world to explain my beliefs about normal citizens, and the one's in power. Basically, the enlightened ones, aware of their subjugation and exploitation are one percenters.... because, the other ninety nine percent of citizens blindly follow their government created path, falling into their position of insignificance and servitude of whatever the government's will. Try explaining this to the brainwashed drones, and you will face harsh resistance. But, everything from preschool to retirement, to laws and taxes are in place to keep power in certain hands without resistance.
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