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The Idea of Love

I'm in love with the idea of love though I feel it's not for me
It's like we're stuck within a game similar to that of hide & seek
We share more than a glance but eye to eye we cannot see
We're on a roller-coaster riding for kicks racing to mountain peaks
Soon after things decline & nosedives to a falling down
When good there's nothing but smiles with beautiful rosy cheeks
What follows is invisible tears accompanied by ugly frowns
Don't shed any tears nor mourn the elusive love for me
I found life along with love deep down within myself
I love me more than another could ever truly offer
This type of selfishness loves to give & is something that always helps
One day I'll find something stronger but built a little softer
On that day I'll offer something more than mere flowers
This is something we'll always share which is something wholly ours

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Christina Bowring

Date: 9/26/2023 12:57:00 PM

Really enjoyed your sonnet Jasen. The line,’ Don’t shed any tears nor mourn the elusive love for me’ is very poignant. I love the last two lines as well. A heartfelt write which is well expressed. Deep and profound thoughts. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing my friend :):)

Jasen Ridley
Date: 9/27/2023 4:54:00 AM

Thank you for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it, Christina! Always good to hear from you. Looking forward to your next piece as well