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The Ice-Cream Truck

The ice-cream truck went way too fast The driver landed on the mast Ice-cream strown everywhere Please, please, please don't despair Screams weren't long or antispast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kerr Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 1:29 AM
Heartiest congratulations, Sara on your triumph on merit. A witty and amusing work to enthuse the early morning riser. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 5:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by with congratulations, Howard. I think I saw on TV how an ice cream truck was traveling on a road close to a harbor and the driver lost control and landed on a sail boat's mast. Sara K.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 4:13 PM
Congratulations, Sara! What is the meaning of antispast?
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Kim, Antispast is a type of meter that sounds like shoe, shoe, boot. He yelled ooow, ooow, ooooooow. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 1:50 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this fun write again. Hooray the truck was saved. Have a great day/week.......................
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Thank you, Paula, for stopping by with congratulations. Well, I am not sure the ice cream truck could be saved but I would think if some children came by they probably got some free ice-cream. Your visits are always welcomed. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 4:53 AM
Sara, congratulations on your winning placement with your funny limerick!
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 8:35 AM
Why, thank you, Tania. So nice of you to congratulate me personally. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Merryman Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 7:03 PM
Not good for the driver but I bet the kids enjoyed all the ice cream! Congrats on your win, Sara! Blessings, Kim M
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2023 at 2:24 AM
Why, thank you, Kim. I appreciate the visit with congratulations. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 12:32 PM
cute one, Sara. Can't wait to see the winner list on these lims.
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Andresen Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 10:38 AM
... free ice cream for everyone ... take as many as you want ... hope the driver went well ... tragic but funny, Sara :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 2:23 PM
Anne-Lise, Thanks for the best wishes. Yes, tragic for the truck and driver. Your visits uplift. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 10:07 AM
A fun/cute ~ write/picture. We need to save the truck. I also did this one. Have a good day..........................
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 2:22 PM
Thank you, Paula. Yes, the truck needs to be saved to serve ice cream again. Your visits are encouraging. Sara
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July 16, 2023 at 8:59 AM
Sara, that must have been horrific for the kids waiting in line, but then I expect the driver wasn’t having a very good time. Love the Lim… Belle
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 9:12 AM
I am sure it was traumatic for them, Belle. Thank you for the creative review of my work. Sara
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:59 AM
The horror is evident in the fallen truck. So sad to see the goodies dispersed on the street. Sending winning wishes your way.
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Vijay, Thanks for the wishes. I wonder if people swooped in and saved the ice-cream from melting saving the day in at least a little way. Your visits are uplifting. Sara
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:28 AM
very clever limerick Sara, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 5:52 AM
Why, thank you, Jan. The driver went ow, ow, OOOW! I appreciate the good luck ..Sara
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