The I of the Storm

I wake feeling groggy
from the tablets at night
Dulling my mind so I can escape
the thoughts going round in my head
Feeling safe as I hide in my bed

Another day dawns
Who am I today
Hyper and over the top 
living life at the speed of light
Or hopeless within a dark black hole
returning to sleep as my day becomes night

Can I be seen by the human race
Is anyone there to look into my face
Why do I feel so alone
Like a zombie 
like a clone
Is that because I isolate
Shut every single door
For I no longer like myself
Locked in forevermore



Written 26th November 2018
Competition: The I of the Storm
Sponsor: Maureen  McGreavy
6th placement

Contest: Ultimate February 2019
Sponsor: Brian Strand
1st place
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Sands Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations for your win Ann :)
Gilmour Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 2:26 PM
Many thanks Heidi, kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 12:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
March 1, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Thank you so much Line. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Barden Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 12:07 AM
Best wishes and sincere congratulations for your win in Maureen's contest, Ann - keep up the great work, and I hope you and yours have a wonderful holiday season! :-) <3
Gilmour Avatar
December 13, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Many thanks for visiting Gregory, I will certainly keep writing my poems, as I have become rather addicted to Poetry Soup, - in a good way that is, haha... Wishing you and your loved ones a wonderful time and a great 2019
Gauthier Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Congrats on your win, Ann. Well penned.
Gilmour Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 1:57 AM
Many thanks for your kind congrats Line. Kindest thoughts Ann x
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