The Hut

There was a hut in the woods
Guarded by trees reaching the sky 
Decorated by the flying leaves
Tidied by the wind dancing around
I tried to reach it 
I tried to catch it
And every time I got closer
It ran far far away

I thought I could find answers
I thought I'd find myself 
I thought the fog would clear
I thought the blindfold could be taken off
But all I saw

Was a blurry version of me
Confused, Angry and Sad
Holding spears and arrows 
Holding myself back
No it wasn't a mirror
She stood in front of me 
In a warm room 
In the hut in the woods

I could hear the stream and I could hear the rain
It was vivid 
Too vivid 
Almost nightmarish 
Almost real
She had the same face 
The same expression
The same dressing 
And the same thoughts 

Yet she stood there 
All fierce and fearless
Just like the storm outside 
She told me 
"This place no longer suits you, 
Leave
For this hut doesn't hold the answers 
You need"
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Kendrick Avatar
December 10, 2025 at 4:27 AM
I like the metaphors used in this one. Sometimes, we have to re-evaluate our life/lives and set goals to become a much better side of ourselves. I enjoyed reading this one featured on homepage today. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
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October 10, 2025 at 7:15 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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