Adell Foster Poet Lyric

The Hunter's Party (Naga-Uta Lyric Form)

Nearing river’s edge;
My thoughts began to wander,
	As brooding clouds formed --
       In a once indigo sky, 
           There the hunter stood…
Yes, the archer and his hounds
	Readying his bow
He implored twins Gemini
“Chase the bull ‘cross Milky Way“… 




(Just a star gazers dream)

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Sharon Winter September 18, 2008 at 5:17 PM Congratulations Adell on your win in Brian's contest! I am not surprised at all! Well done! Love, Shar

September 18, 2008 at 1:12 PM Nice use of imagery and personification in this poem. Congratulations on being selected as one of Brian's Naga-Uta contest winners. Keep on writing! I wish you continued success. Karen

September 3, 2008 at 7:59 AM And what a wonderful dream that is. I like the your use of personification and imagery in this new form to me. I hope you entered it in Brian's contest. Best wishes. Thank you for your kind words regarding my attempt at this form. Have a nice day! Karen

Sharon Winter August 29, 2008 at 7:13 AM Brilliant! You did a wonderful job with this form of poetry. Star gazing is a beautiful thing. Love, Shar