The Hunter

The Hunter Grandson Ho-hum Possum ‘Yum-yum Preparing the feast, grandson, ho-hum. Slayer of beast, possum, ‘yum-yum! © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 16, 2010 Poetic form: Tyburn

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Date: 3/19/2010 12:33:00 PM

Got a chuckle out of this one! Thank you for the day brightener. Have a good weekend. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/18/2010 8:10:00 AM

This is sooo funny, Dane Ann. Very clever tyburn! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2010 7:11:00 AM

Interesting write in this one...I'll have to say that I have never eaten possum and knew that I was eating possum...Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for reading my work and taking your time to read and comment...Sara

John Beam

Date: 3/18/2010 7:05:00 AM

thanks for comment interesting form may have to try it Lord Jesus willing

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2010 6:57:00 AM

Possum!!! Have you eaten possum, Dane Ann? This is cute. LUv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 3/18/2010 6:41:00 AM

thanks for commenting on my photos on facebook. enjoyed reading your works today. did you get a new form of poetry started with the end line? it is a good form.