''The Hum of Betrayal''

~An erosion of senceless sin.
Prolonged only by your avid absent conscience.
~Reality blurs no more.~
I fear trust will lye  behind these electric fences that divide us.
Like Scarlett fever,the plagued dishonesty fills only views of deception.
If only my ache for you would fade.
Still as stone,the filth consumes you whole.
Trapped to the hum of betrayal.~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 10, 2026 at 8:40 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem, and the emotions and imagery are so vivid that I could easily picture them being brought to life through beautiful illustrations. I'm a freelance manga/webtoon artist who takes on paid commissions, and I'd love to discuss the possibility of adapting your poem into a visual storytelling piece if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at [email protected]!
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June 12, 2016 at 12:39 AM
Kacey Greenlee, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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October 24, 2012 at 1:12 PM
Kacey, very well written - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lander Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 12:46 PM
An erosion of senceless sin. senseless sin.. Deep : a poem that leave pondering thoughts within..
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