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The House of Madame

It was a very long day And a long way from home Country back roads Skies of chrome Tiredness kicks in I need to stop A house up ahead I'll stop and knock The door opens Pleasantries in greet Invited inside Tired and dead beat The lady of the house Offers a drink A small wine i say As she replies with a wink We sit and talk About our pasts Sad stories And past laughs The evening draws As i my head starts spinning I feel elated Is the evening beginning Music is played As i drink more wine Energetic in dance As i feel mighty fine We end up dancing Our hands in places Lips touching And not just faces Slowly my clothes Start to fall to the floor My hands on flesh I've never seen before Her body so shaped Even through hazy eyes She takes my hand To her glittering prize Her hands mould Around me so My head like a carousel In spinning mode I seem to know what i am doing But unable to stop Like I'm on top of the world And never to drop The feeling of joy Surrounds my brain Elements of ecstasy Like sparkling champagne Naked and set My body flows In body arousal Our nakedness shows The kissing gets frantic As we sigh and groan On the floor we writhed In sporadic moan As i lie there I recall the lights My head in confusion Now I'm out like a light I'm awakened early By a knock at the door The lady of the house In breakfast chore I sit there eating As my body aches Scratches and marks Was i in partake I have no recollection Of the evening that's past I can recall driving up And that's the last I say my goodbye's As i thank my host She winks as i leave Looking as white as a ghost I get in my car And i head of home Stopping for gas No more wandering roam I speak to the attendant About the house where i stayed A lady so kind How at home i was made He turns to me As if i had taken a turn There's been no one there for years His face showing concern I stand in momentary shock As he tells me the news The marks on my body And the bluest of bruise All the way home I try to recollect About the previous night My thoughts can't project http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy2.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/12/2009 9:20:00 AM
Nice twist at the end, I love your work and how versatile you are with different forms and topics....Aleera
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Date: 9/6/2009 2:47:00 PM
i loved the twist in the end of this poem..the paranorma..the mystery..it gives a thrill.excellent and original work--Charma
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Date: 9/6/2009 1:16:00 PM
Wow. I loved it! Thanks for your comment :)
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Date: 9/5/2009 11:57:00 PM
Highlander you are exploring the unknown and this issssssss gooooood, NO EXCELLENT :D lol I loved this one love and rsspect Jayne x x x
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Date: 9/5/2009 6:18:00 PM
wow! imaginative! you have given us fine art here! highlander!...jim
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Date: 9/5/2009 1:17:00 PM
Intriguing write friend...... I REALLY enjoyed this piece.. Stuck within your words, flowing with its rhythm......:JP]
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Date: 9/5/2009 12:17:00 PM
Some more wild fantasy ghost story. Sara
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Date: 9/5/2009 11:46:00 AM
Wow, great poem, I haven't read a long poem in a while...Raul
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Date: 9/5/2009 11:28:00 AM
Super, James! I could see it all through your eyes as you looked out of your window. You have a great imagination. This poem took my mind on a pleasant journey. Thanks. Lovingly, Dane
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