The House of Madame

It was a very long day
And a long way from home
Country back roads
Skies of chrome
 
Tiredness kicks in
I need to stop
A house up ahead
I'll stop and knock
 
The door opens
Pleasantries in greet
Invited inside
Tired and dead beat
 
The lady of the house
Offers a drink
A small wine i say
As she replies with a wink
 
We sit and talk
About our pasts
Sad stories
And past laughs
 
The evening draws
As i my head starts spinning
I feel elated
Is the evening beginning
 
Music is played
As i drink more wine
Energetic in dance
As i feel mighty fine
 
We end up dancing
Our hands in places
Lips touching
And not just faces
 
Slowly my clothes
Start to fall to the floor
My hands on flesh
I've never seen before
 
Her body so shaped
Even through hazy eyes
She takes my hand
To her glittering prize
 
Her hands mould 
Around me so
My head like a carousel
In spinning mode
 
I seem to know what i am doing
But unable to stop
Like I'm on top of the world
And never to drop
 
The feeling of joy
Surrounds my brain
Elements of ecstasy
Like sparkling champagne
 
Naked and set
My body flows
In body arousal
Our nakedness shows
 
The kissing gets frantic
As we sigh and groan
On the floor we writhed
In sporadic moan
 
As i lie there
I recall the lights
My head in confusion
Now I'm out like a light
 
I'm awakened early
By a knock at the door
The lady of the house
In breakfast chore
 
I sit there eating
As my body aches
Scratches and marks
Was i in partake
 
I have no recollection
Of the evening that's past
I can recall driving up
And that's the last
 
I say my goodbye's
As i thank my host
She winks as i leave
Looking as white as a ghost
 
I get in my car
And i head of home
Stopping for gas
No more wandering roam
 
I speak to the attendant
About the house where i stayed
A lady so kind
How at home i was made
 
He turns to me
As if i had taken a turn
There's been no one there for years
His face showing concern
 
I stand in momentary shock
As he tells me the news
The marks on my body
And the bluest of bruise
 
All the way home
I try to recollect
About the previous night
My thoughts can't project



http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy2.php
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/12/2009 9:20:00 AM
Nice twist at the end, I love your work and how versatile you are with different forms and topics....Aleera
Login to Reply
Date: 9/6/2009 2:47:00 PM
i loved the twist in the end of this poem..the paranorma..the mystery..it gives a thrill.excellent and original work--Charma
Login to Reply
Date: 9/6/2009 1:16:00 PM
Wow. I loved it! Thanks for your comment :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2009 11:57:00 PM
Highlander you are exploring the unknown and this issssssss gooooood, NO EXCELLENT :D lol I loved this one love and rsspect Jayne x x x
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2009 6:18:00 PM
wow! imaginative! you have given us fine art here! highlander!...jim
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2009 1:17:00 PM
Intriguing write friend...... I REALLY enjoyed this piece.. Stuck within your words, flowing with its rhythm......:JP]
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2009 12:17:00 PM
Some more wild fantasy ghost story. Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2009 11:46:00 AM
Wow, great poem, I haven't read a long poem in a while...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 9/5/2009 11:28:00 AM
Super, James! I could see it all through your eyes as you looked out of your window. You have a great imagination. This poem took my mind on a pleasant journey. Thanks. Lovingly, Dane
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter