Meter - Trochaic Tetrameter.
...Note - Each line's end beat alternates between Acateletic to Cateletic for variation in flow....Thanks, Gene Bourne.
Rhyme - A-B / A-B
Kismet yanks the rug I'm standing, Shocked it barely sways my stance. Should have been a back-side landing, Unexpected happenchance. Anger follows loud reporting. As for me, my silence holds. I'm the villan, unsupporting, Tiresome lines, the same old role. New perspective thrills my senses, Plays must reach their final scene. As I pack, I feel a cleansing, Cancelled drama, blank marquee. Gene Bourne. 09-12-14 .
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