The Hotel Pool Is Closed Today

The Hotel Pool Is Closed Today

By Elton Camp

We were on vacation down Florida way
Picked a hotel where we wanted to stay

Weather was hot, so in order to get cool
We went out back for a dip in the pool

A crude sign read, “Pool closed today.”
“What’s behind that,” I did angrily say

I was about to go to the office to protest
When my wife pointed & said, “It’s best.”

The way she indicated, I directed my eyes
Then gave a gasp of horror and surprise 

The alligator lurking in the pool so low
An excellent reason, in the water not to go
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bauer Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 4:20 PM
i like this poem! the ending is very unexpected and clever!
O'Leary Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 3:51 PM
Funny! Terry
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June 25, 2012 at 1:57 PM
Alligator in the pool.....no thank you..... I take a cool shower....good Elton !!! - oxox Anne-Lise
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