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The Host

The great cawing host
Fills the sky with wings and claws
Turning day to night








3rd place in 'Tattered Wings'

Copyright © Nick Bagnall | Year Posted 2010

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April 17, 2010 at 3:39 AM

So it is, Nick! Great choice of imagination. Here we have only few wild pidgeons but lots of crows and jackdaws...Thank you for your comment. After my visitors have left, I'm back on PS with some new Tanka...Have a nice weekend...Gert

April 11, 2010 at 5:46 AM

Nice take on the picture Nick, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Andrea Dietrich

April 11, 2010 at 12:36 AM

Good one, Nick, Congratulations!

Margaret Foster

April 9, 2010 at 9:47 PM

Congratulations Nick well done...Margaret

Steven Mossburg

April 9, 2010 at 6:47 PM

you have captured sight and sound in just a few words. good job! congratulations on your win!

April 9, 2010 at 5:01 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

April 9, 2010 at 2:33 PM

Excellent haiku that brings a new perspective on the photo. Congratulations on your win, Nick! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 9, 2010 at 2:33 PM

Congrats Nick on your 3rd place win in Raul's contest... excellent write and win..luv.. "Sweetheart"

April 9, 2010 at 10:58 AM

Nick, congratulations in placing third in my contest...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

April 9, 2010 at 5:53 AM

enjoyed

April 9, 2010 at 5:52 AM

I enjoyed the haiku. good write

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