The Host

The great cawing host Fills the sky with wings and claws Turning day to night 3rd place in 'Tattered Wings'

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/17/2010 3:39:00 AM

So it is, Nick! Great choice of imagination. Here we have only few wild pidgeons but lots of crows and jackdaws...Thank you for your comment. After my visitors have left, I'm back on PS with some new Tanka...Have a nice weekend...Gert

James Fraser

Date: 4/11/2010 5:46:00 AM

Nice take on the picture Nick, many congratulations on your win in Raul's fine contest >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2010 12:36:00 AM

Good one, Nick, Congratulations!

Margaret Foster

Date: 4/9/2010 9:47:00 PM

Congratulations Nick well done...Margaret

Steven Mossburg

Date: 4/9/2010 6:47:00 PM

you have captured sight and sound in just a few words. good job! congratulations on your win!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/9/2010 5:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/9/2010 2:33:00 PM

Congrats Nick on your 3rd place win in Raul's contest... excellent write and win..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/9/2010 2:33:00 PM

Excellent haiku that brings a new perspective on the photo. Congratulations on your win, Nick! Love, Carolyn

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/9/2010 10:58:00 AM

Nick, congratulations in placing third in my contest...Raul

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/9/2010 5:53:00 AM

enjoyed

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/9/2010 5:52:00 AM

I enjoyed the haiku. good write