The Horsehead

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Of all existence, revered nebulae, Thus through this sonnet, a proposed tribute, From whence first seen, served to personify, Confirmed heart resigned being absolute. Once star, a major presence to being, Alone dependent worlds, ingratiates, Presently, a vast expanse as best seen, A belt of towering steed, satiates. Our cramped frame, paired to your fantastic realm, Proportionately, grandeur to compare, Leans on the unthinkable to fathom, A just aim be a journey set to wear. Sojourners souls lead to air a last flight, In a pink pasture, horse waits for its knight. Date: 06/13/2019

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2019 7:07:00 PM

an astronomical wonder, william... i missed your contest ; needed bedrest but will try your new one... huggs

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/13/2019 7:27:00 PM

There'll be more nette, Aloha William