The Horse Galloped

At the crossroad
I was knocked down
by a speeding horse.
Off it Galloped ,
his mane flowing.

"Oh, harbinger of hope,
please tell them,
I lie broken
awaiting for their help."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Wolf Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Oh, horsefeathers!!
Singh Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:20 PM
Thanks
Kendrick Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 4:57 AM
Oh! No! I am wondering if the horse is a metaphor for something else or it was a real horse. I enjoyed reading your post. I can feel the pain within the lines. Thank you for sharing. Sara K
Singh Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 11:20 PM
It is metaphor.Thank you for reading and kind comment.
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