Daniela Angeja Poet Rhyme Royal

The Horse

Ride with me
I'll show you miss
I'll show you bliss
Where your mind is

Come with body
Come with soul
Drive me kindly
To your goal

Do not fault me
For your mistakes
I will not jugde thee
Your skipped pace

Show me kindness
Show me your heart
I will grow wings
To master your art

And then you found
I am your horse
To take you heaven
You have once lost

We seal our friendship
We take our oath
To be together 
In this ride on Earth

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Daver Austin October 2, 2012 at 9:28 AM Aint animals wonderful. A horse is probably the most stoic of all. Congrats on the selection. daver Daniela Angeja October 6, 2012 at 7:46 PM Thank you Daver! Yes, the mots stoic ever!

Sheri Fresonke Harper October 1, 2012 at 11:55 AM Daniela, you capture a love poem with your horse really well, excellent, congratulations on your win. :) Sheri Daniela Angeja October 1, 2012 at 1:24 PM Hi Sheri, thank you so much for your appreciation letter, we writers are nothing if we don't have good readers that appreciates what we do. My best regards

Carol Sunshine Brown October 1, 2012 at 5:48 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Get it together" contest Daniela. Love, Carol Daniela Angeja October 1, 2012 at 1:28 PM Hello Carol, thank you so much for your kind words. Cheers! Daniela

Poet Destroyer A September 29, 2012 at 12:35 AM Daniela, congratulations with your wonderful and well deserved win after expression your thoughts for the ~~India Arie - "Get it together" ~ Contest... It was nice hosting this contest for "Hughes, William" from the soup. Take care~ XOX ~PD Daniela Angeja September 29, 2012 at 5:23 PM Thank you so much Poet, it was my very first poem, I will try to give always my best. Thank you to everybody. Best regards to all Daniela

Chipepo Lwele September 22, 2012 at 9:27 AM Lovely and nicely done Daniela Angeja October 1, 2012 at 1:29 PM Thank you so much Chipepo!

Michael J. Falotico September 19, 2012 at 3:58 PM Excellent Poetry... you are a true Poet... thats how you write from your soul.... Proud to have spent this time reading you and hope to see more soon..... when time allows check out my new website.. http://PoetMike.weebly.com love to hear feedback... hugs Michael Daniela Angeja October 1, 2012 at 1:34 PM Hi Michael, your words have put me into right track, now I know I can improove and keep on writing, your words were very important to me. My best wishes to you and your endavors. Daniela

Ralph Mason September 17, 2012 at 4:51 PM lovely poem! You oath sounds like more than just friendship but then again what IS friendship? warm thoughts, Ralph Daniela Angeja October 1, 2012 at 1:37 PM Yes, Ralph you are right, its more than friendship, it is real and good connection. This horse of mine understood my every move and mood, he knew me better than myself! Best regards, and thank you so much for your comments. Daniela

Daniela Angeja September 16, 2012 at 2:46 PM Thank you all for your kind words and support.

Annie Lander September 15, 2012 at 3:43 PM nicely said.. welcome and keep your work coming Daniela Angeja October 1, 2012 at 1:38 PM Thank you Annie, I will try to keep up!

Cynthia Alvez September 15, 2012 at 9:16 AM A lovely verse...you must have shown your horse much kindness for this treasure given in return. I'm smiling here! Cynthia Daniela Angeja October 1, 2012 at 1:40 PM Thank you Cynthia, yes, we understood each other quite well, and I gave my best to him and he to me, a real and good connection!