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The Horse

Ride with me I'll show you miss I'll show you bliss Where your mind is Come with body Come with soul Drive me kindly To your goal Do not fault me For your mistakes I will not jugde thee Your skipped pace Show me kindness Show me your heart I will grow wings To master your art And then you found I am your horse To take you heaven You have once lost We seal our friendship We take our oath To be together In this ride on Earth

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Daver Austin

Date: 10/2/2012 9:28:00 AM

Aint animals wonderful. A horse is probably the most stoic of all. Congrats on the selection. daver

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/6/2012 7:46:00 PM

Thank you Daver! Yes, the mots stoic ever!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 10/1/2012 11:55:00 AM

Daniela, you capture a love poem with your horse really well, excellent, congratulations on your win. :) Sheri

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:24:00 PM

Hi Sheri, thank you so much for your appreciation letter, we writers are nothing if we don't have good readers that appreciates what we do. My best regards

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2012 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Get it together" contest Daniela. Love, Carol

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:28:00 PM

Hello Carol, thank you so much for your kind words. Cheers! Daniela

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2012 12:35:00 AM

Daniela, congratulations with your wonderful and well deserved win after expression your thoughts for the ~~India Arie - "Get it together" ~ Contest... It was nice hosting this contest for "Hughes, William" from the soup. Take care~ XOX ~PD

Daniela Angeja
Date: 9/29/2012 5:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Poet, it was my very first poem, I will try to give always my best. Thank you to everybody. Best regards to all Daniela

Chipepo Lwele

Date: 9/22/2012 9:27:00 AM

Lovely and nicely done

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:29:00 PM

Thank you so much Chipepo!

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/19/2012 3:58:00 PM

Excellent Poetry... you are a true Poet... thats how you write from your soul.... Proud to have spent this time reading you and hope to see more soon..... when time allows check out my new website.. http://PoetMike.weebly.com love to hear feedback... hugs Michael

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:34:00 PM

Hi Michael, your words have put me into right track, now I know I can improove and keep on writing, your words were very important to me. My best wishes to you and your endavors. Daniela

Ralph Mason

Date: 9/17/2012 4:51:00 PM

lovely poem! You oath sounds like more than just friendship but then again what IS friendship? warm thoughts, Ralph

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:37:00 PM

Yes, Ralph you are right, its more than friendship, it is real and good connection. This horse of mine understood my every move and mood, he knew me better than myself! Best regards, and thank you so much for your comments. Daniela

Daniela Angeja

Date: 9/16/2012 2:46:00 PM

Thank you all for your kind words and support.

Annie Lander

Date: 9/15/2012 3:43:00 PM

nicely said.. welcome and keep your work coming

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:38:00 PM

Thank you Annie, I will try to keep up!

Cynthia Alvez

Date: 9/15/2012 9:16:00 AM

A lovely verse...you must have shown your horse much kindness for this treasure given in return. I'm smiling here! Cynthia

Daniela Angeja
Date: 10/1/2012 1:40:00 PM

Thank you Cynthia, yes, we understood each other quite well, and I gave my best to him and he to me, a real and good connection!