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The Hopping Toad

The Hopping Toad Nursery Rhyme As I was walking down the road I saw a lumpy, bumpy toad. He looked to the left And then the right Then hopped his way back home alright, Hop, hop, stop, hop, Hop your way back home Hop hop stop, hop, Hop your way back home. 21st April 2021

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Kim Merryman

Date: 4/24/2021 8:51:00 AM

This is cute, Janine! Congrats on your HM! Blessings, Kim M

Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:41:00 AM

Thank you kim, i am very pleased and so appreciative of your comments. xx

Eve Roper

Date: 4/24/2021 8:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Janine, it would had scored higher, but you forgot to add Nursery Rhyme at the end of your title. Eve

Eve Roper
Date: 4/25/2021 2:03:00 PM

Sorry, but it is not in the submitting entry where it states SUBMITTE TITLE an it filles your title in big bold black letters, so when I look at the new poems I will not accidently read it.

Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:40:00 AM

Hi eve, thank you for the win, i am a bit confused as i did put nursery rhyme at the end of my title as shown in 'my poems' link. but thank you anyway, your comments are very much appreciated. I used to make little rhymes like this when walking my children to school, it kept them happy and they forgot they were walking to school instead of being taken in the car. sneaky but happy.xxxx

Warren Doll

Date: 4/24/2021 8:03:00 AM

Janine, You are an astute observer of nature. You have expressed the movements of a toad, especially the eyes very accurately in this wonderful poem. I enjoyed it very much~ Warren

Janine Lever
Date: 4/24/2021 10:41:00 AM

Thank you warren, i truly appreciate your comments. And yes, i love nature. xx