The Hope of Need

Need is a thing which is of need,
But its just a wish indeed.

                     God helps those in need,
                     But some rest indeed.

For some need is the only hope,
But chances of hope are nope.

                       Man is indeed in need,
                       But he lives in weeds.

Man is needs a hope,
But he fails to cope.

                     Its quoted in a right way,
                     The truth of life of pay.

In this world of poverty,
Which challenges man's anxiety.

         His most weight is heavier,
         When he is an empty pocketer.

This world is bagged with breeds,
The thing which is alive is indeed,
The hope of need.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Interesing winning work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Congrats on your great win..Sara
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August 17, 2013 at 11:08 PM
CONGRAT on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~ SKAT ~
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August 17, 2013 at 10:19 PM
Hi Husain, . Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA
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August 16, 2013 at 7:28 AM
congrats on your win xx
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August 15, 2013 at 12:50 AM
congrats on your super win. (:c Jenish
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August 14, 2013 at 5:36 PM
Husain, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox Linda
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August 4, 2013 at 5:43 PM
Husain,, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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August 4, 2013 at 12:27 PM
Hello new member: Husain ! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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August 4, 2013 at 5:30 AM
"The Hope of Need" very unique poem. Good start to The Soup, welcome my friend! MC
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August 4, 2013 at 3:31 AM
a genuine line of thoughts. creating around the hope of needs. Husain, -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@...
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