Robert Lindley Poet Monoku

The Hope, Climbing To Ascend

The Hope, Climbing To Ascend

born of earthen soil, clay models of infinite degrees and sky hopes
snowy mountain ledge, peak ringed by white stormy clouds, icy silent breath

12/20/2019
Poetry Contest: ku duet 
Sponsored by: Silent One
Syllable count 34
checked by,  How Many Syllables.com

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Line Gauthier January 8, 2020 at 7:11 PM Congrats on your top win, Robert. Well done.

Paul Callus January 5, 2020 at 8:46 AM This beautiful imagery undoubtedly merits this top placement, Robert! Congratulations, my friend. Regards // paul

Eve Roper January 4, 2020 at 9:55 PM Congratulations on your in Silent One's contest. Hugs Eve

Juliet Ligon January 4, 2020 at 9:17 PM Great imagery. Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2020 at 5:47 PM Robert, it's so nice to see your beautiful mononku on this winner list. Congrats. And may God bless you and yours this new year.

Jc Hawkens January 4, 2020 at 4:06 PM Beautiful poem and wonderfully written. Congrats on your 1st Place. JC

Anne-Lise Andresen January 4, 2020 at 1:24 PM - A wonderful ku duet, Robert :) - Congratulations on a 1st place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams January 4, 2020 at 11:18 AM beautiful imagery.... congrats on your top win :) hugs

John Hamilton January 4, 2020 at 8:04 AM Wonderful write, congrats Robert on your top win!

Jenish Somadas January 4, 2020 at 7:38 AM Congrats on your wonderful victory..

Kim Rodrigues January 4, 2020 at 7:06 AM Builds with breathtaking results! Congrats, Robert!

Silent One January 4, 2020 at 6:51 AM icy silent breath..loved that... you said so much in two lines... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

M. L. Kiser January 2, 2020 at 7:35 PM Very beautiful, Robert. Robert Lindley January 3, 2020 at 3:39 PM Thank you my friend. God bless you and yours....

FJ Thomas January 2, 2020 at 11:45 AM Hm, a chilling silence. Beautiful Robert. Hope you are doing okay :) Robert Lindley January 3, 2020 at 3:38 PM Thank you my friend. I am doing well. Pray you are too. God bless...

Lady Labyrinth January 1, 2020 at 6:15 PM Beautiful, very...the imagery is divine; white stormy clouds, now there's something you don't see every day... I hear miracles are meant to come riding on the clouds. Surely, this is the winner. L x Robert Lindley January 1, 2020 at 9:37 PM Thank you my friend. I have experienced more than one miracle in my life and truth is my finally stopping fighting this world every moment of everyday- has yielded delicious fruits and golden promises of a future bright. God bless..

Panagiota Romios January 1, 2020 at 10:53 AM Beauty and grace from the pen of one of the best here, Love, Panagiota xxx Robert Lindley January 1, 2020 at 5:10 PM Thank you my friend. May God's blessings embrace you and yours in this wonderful coming decade!

Connie Marcum Wong December 31, 2019 at 2:43 AM The beautiful hush of winter shines Robert. Excellent! : ) xxoo Robert Lindley December 31, 2019 at 5:36 PM Thank you my friend. May God bless you and yours all a Very Happy and Peaceful New Year..

Quoth Theraven December 31, 2019 at 12:25 AM Robert, Enough hope in this icy breath heights? It is a fair bet. -Richard Robert Lindley December 31, 2019 at 5:35 PM Thank you my friend. Wishing you and yours a prosperous and very blessed New Year!

Ann Foster December 30, 2019 at 4:43 PM Powerful... excellence... Ann Robert Lindley December 30, 2019 at 9:17 PM Thank you my friend. Contest theme and this new form both inspired me to sling some ink.. God bless.... Happy New Year to you and yours!!