The Hook

In shimmering depths, love's barbed allure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Allison Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 6:18 PM
clever line indeed i fell for this hook line and sinker! hugs jan xx
Mclain Avatar
June 22, 2023 at 6:05 AM
l.o.l. Jan, your comment seems more poetic than line. Hug's back to you as well, James.
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