The Honeymoon

The honey moon[Alliteration]

Tobi takes Tope to Thailand in a top class Train,
which  makes  Mike to marry Michelle
in Cynthia`s crystalline church, 
This baffles Becky Baker but,
Propels Peter Parker to pick a powerful package.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:18 PM
Some tongue twisters here..Great winning work..Congrats..Sara
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 7:05 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!-----Lori
Freeman Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 2:26 PM
Olusegun, Thanks for the honor of reading your poem ""The Honeymoon" , I was honored by your worthy poetry. Congratulations on your place. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Moses' "Alliteration Poem Please" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 4:24 AM
hey Olusequn congrats on your win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:53 AM
congrats olusegun on top ten victory with this great Alliteration poetry luv..
Ramsdale Avatar
September 12, 2011 at 12:52 AM
A 6th place congratulations my friend for your placement in John Freeman's Alliteration Poems Please contest. CR
Mehta Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 6:23 PM
Nice expression with humor and wit, olusegun
Dailey Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 5:34 PM
I don't see this as a limerick but I am not sure what I would call it either.
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