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The Homeplace

Here further down the hillside slope
Down close to the creek with hope

My husband bought a house, land
Fenced in and made many plans

Subdued the land to cow pasture
And planted a garden, fruit trees sure

Fathered another child to call him sir
The creek seemed to like the stir

Enjoyed the children for a little while___
Loved them so that it made her smile

Today she loves grandchildren the same
No girls there are in frills ___tame

The creek keeps on flowing to the sea
The land is mostly stripped of trees


(This is my adaptation of Robert Frost's poem "The Birthplace".  I hope that it does not insult 
his work.)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/26/2010 6:53:00 PM
congrats on the HM win in the PS contest!! did you get you certificate? I got mine last week!!
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Date: 7/27/2010 5:41:00 AM
WARMEST CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN!!! Well done. love, shar xo
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Date: 7/22/2010 7:32:00 AM
Way to go, Sara! Congrats on placing high in the international contest. Love, Dave
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Date: 7/21/2010 8:11:00 PM
THIS IS REALLY GOOD. ENJOYED READING THIS. CONGRATULATION ON HAVING IT FEATURED. LOVE RHONDA
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Date: 7/21/2010 1:56:00 PM
lovely one Sara, congrats on having it featured this wek
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Date: 7/20/2010 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in the soup contest.
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Date: 7/20/2010 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Charles
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Date: 7/19/2010 1:57:00 PM
What a beautiful poem to place in the International contest, Sara. A wonderful and deserving win !! Hooray for you...and hope your family is on the road to healing soon! God Bless! ~ love, Carrie
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Date: 7/19/2010 11:22:00 AM
Congrats Sara on having your poem being featured this week, enjoy the honor and keep writing. Love, always Adeleke
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Date: 7/19/2010 9:09:00 AM
great work! Sara! congrats! jimbo
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Date: 7/19/2010 6:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup Contest Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2010 5:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:58:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your big win in the Poetry Soup contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy a special moment on the Soup.. with luv..
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:30:00 PM
ps and I very much liked the homey and nostalgic atmosphere of this one!
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:30:00 PM
wow, Sara, I am proud of you. Both you and your daughter got placed. WELL done. And congratulations. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/18/2010 4:32:00 PM
Robert Frost would be very proud o you, dear Sara. Cogratulations! on your well deserved win with this incredible poem. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/18/2010 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations Sara.Iam not surprised to see you in the winners circle of poems!!! Great work! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 7/18/2010 1:50:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your featured poem this week on the Soup .. a brilliant piece to share with us all.. with luv..
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Date: 7/18/2010 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the PS Feb. 2010 Contest! Peace, love, Audrey. Hope you're doing good. God bless! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:43:00 AM
Many congrats on your feature and win in the contest. Rgds Jan
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:30:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS! I am so happy to see your name here in the winners circle! This poem is truly excellent! Congratulations, again on your BIG WIN! Peace and happiness, John
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Date: 7/17/2010 11:03:00 PM
A very sweet depiction of a best place to retire. The nature itself is a witness of this strong family foundation. Great write and congratulations for winning this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 6/3/2010 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Sara. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2010 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations for the second round! Good luck!
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Date: 5/31/2010 5:29:00 PM
made it to the second round!! congrats!! enjoyed reading again!!
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