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Two police officers sat in their patrol car, staring at a flag atop a flagpole in a neighborhood whose houses were wiped out. Stunned they took pictures then collected the flag. Now they search for the owners. True story.

The Home of the Brave

THE HOME OF THE BRAVE

O the flag still waves
in Paradise
red, white, blue and singed

as serpentine colors licked
with razor-sharp tongues —
black and white
egg yolk yellow
and rip-roaring red
snapping, crackling, tearing
in armageddon style

O an angel stood guard
taking mercy
upon a lone symbol

Patriotism withstanding

11/13/2018

*Title from last line of The Star Spangled Banner
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 1:40 PM
'Patriotism withstanding!' That phrases really rocks for me. I'm an unabashed, unrepentantly sentimental patriot. I sing the SSB at the top of my lungs (well, almost at the top), and I cry at the end. I don't pay any attention to whatever's in or out--and it's never "in" to sing the SSB at ballgames. The USA was a refuge for my family from Hitler's Holocaust. If not for this great country, my family would have been "little bars of soap." Thank you, Kim! Best wishes, gw
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 1:43 PM
Wow, Gershon! Thank you for sharing your poignant moment! My family met for a football game at a Sports Tavern this past weekend and we all stood up during the SSB as we always do! <3 Kim
Rose  Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 11:45 AM
How sad when our home is destroyed. Nice poem very heart felt Kim, Have a great day.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 11:56 AM
Thank you, dear Pixie!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 9:36 PM
A superb tribute to our flag and the brave men and women who have fought for our freedom. The fire in Paradise is so devastating for all who lost their homes, some that lost their lives. Three cheers to all the brave firefighters who are still fighting blazes in California where three of my children reside. Bravo! ; )
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 10:05 PM
I lived in Northern California for a couple years. This is so sad!
Gentile Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 8:09 AM
Kim, This is such a moving piece to read as this devastation continues and a lovely tribute as well xxoo
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 2:54 PM
Thanks, Mike!
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