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The Holy Spirit Gift

A wedding gown pure white, the sign of change aquatic. The baptism of water, fire — sins death spurs life. Sweet oil like rain, offer of praise — symbiotic. The raise and court of hands; the congregation’s rife emotion grabs the Father’s attention, not lame. Son’s hands stretched wide, received by the heavens. Christ sends the comforter, the wise, the healer too — the names synonymous — the Holy Spirit gift — our friend. We’re touched in fellowship, the precipitous reach. The Spirit gives us fruit as we believe; the tree grows love, joy, peace and patience too; we’re given each and “ness” of kind, good, faith and gentle — all sweetens “we.” Of self-control, the one we are afraid to pick — we must! The freedom sates; it takes away our fear. Our hunger pangs? We’re filled and safe, not sick. The Holy Spirit cleanses us — our conscience clear. 11/29/2019 Holy Spirit Poetry Contest Sponsor: Chantelle Cooke
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 4:49 AM
You indeed have won a contest and this poem has won the hearts of many no doubt!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you, Caren!
Kauffman Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 11:22 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 7:30 AM
Thank you, Sam!
Roper Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 9:09 PM
Back with a big congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 9:10 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Na Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:53 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 9:10 PM
Thank you, Greg!
Agustin Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:48 PM
Wow! Congrats! God be praised and thanked for this poem of yours expressing the works of the Holy Spirit in our lives. God bless you.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 9:10 PM
Thank you, sweet lady!
Hinshaw Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:26 PM
Beautifully written, Kim, and a sure winner for the contest. Better yet your faith shines thru in this insightful verse. Many thanks for your kind comment re Alexa. Of all places, the idea came to me in church this morning when my mind wandered off from the pastor's sermon - Lord forgive me - ha! Best to you - BoB
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:28 PM
I understand! Poems formulate for me in church too! Thanks!
Romios Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:16 AM
You are one of the best writers here. It shows in this creation. Best wishes Panagiota xx
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 1:22 PM
Thank you, Panagiota! <3
Mcintosh Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 6:15 AM
I love the Holy Spirit and your write , love to you
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 1:22 PM
Thanks so much :)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 2:01 AM
A gorgeous, virginal write that shows the true spirit of spirit.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 2:39 AM
Thank you, dear poet!
Teagan Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 10:28 PM
Kim, this is amazing! There is no better gift, and you've described it so perfectly. God bless.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 10:34 PM
Thank you so much, Becca!
Roper Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 7:47 PM
Nicely said, Kim, we are his home he dwells in. God bless you and good luck
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 7:48 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Na Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 6:51 PM
Hi Kim simply amazing you did right here. This will be high on the list. You captured the holy spirit in groves. Thanks for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest but with this you dont need any luck you got the holy spirit in you now. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 6:58 PM
Thanks, Greg! Holy Spirit blessings to you, dear poet!
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