Natalie Jones Poet I do not know?

The Holocaust

So I visited the Holocaust museum and then wrote this poem about it....



As I stepped through the door,
Tears filled my eyes.
Looking at the horror.
Seeing Hitler's lies.
He convinced so many people,
that this genocide was right.
He even killed the cripple.
So they'd go down without a fight.

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Raul Moreno May 23, 2009 at 11:41 PM Natalia, congrats on your feature...Raul

Vince Suzadail Jr. May 23, 2009 at 4:45 PM Congrats Natalie on "The Holocaust" being featured. Vince

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen May 22, 2009 at 2:00 PM Hitler was a beast. We're not supposed to judge. We are supposed to forgive...to help ourselves have righteous hearts. God will deal with the likes of Hitler for all eternity. Excellent write, Natalie. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane

Sharon Winter May 18, 2009 at 6:30 AM Congrats on a most excellent featured write. Love, Shar

Ernilando Tugaff May 18, 2009 at 12:24 AM Straight to the heart. Congratulations on your featured poem. Welcome to the soupland. Ernilando

May 17, 2009 at 5:21 PM Much conveyed in just eight lines. Let us hope that the world never sees such a tragedy again. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen

Joseph Spence Sr May 15, 2009 at 6:42 AM This is an excellent submission. I like the flow of the words and the message. Welcome to poetry Soup. ~Joseph

James Fraser April 28, 2009 at 2:19 PM Nice write Natalie, short and straight to the core, i like this one a lot. If you get a spare moment check out my holókauston, it has parts 1 and 2 as its a story with history attached, James,xx