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The Holocaust

So I visited the Holocaust museum and then wrote this poem about it.... As I stepped through the door, Tears filled my eyes. Looking at the horror. Seeing Hitler's lies. He convinced so many people, that this genocide was right. He even killed the cripple. So they'd go down without a fight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/23/2009 11:41:00 PM
Natalia, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 5/23/2009 4:45:00 PM
Congrats Natalie on "The Holocaust" being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/22/2009 2:00:00 PM
Hitler was a beast. We're not supposed to judge. We are supposed to forgive...to help ourselves have righteous hearts. God will deal with the likes of Hitler for all eternity. Excellent write, Natalie. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep writing, Love and Hugs, Dane
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Date: 5/18/2009 6:30:00 AM
Congrats on a most excellent featured write. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/18/2009 12:24:00 AM
Straight to the heart. Congratulations on your featured poem. Welcome to the soupland. Ernilando
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:21:00 PM
Much conveyed in just eight lines. Let us hope that the world never sees such a tragedy again. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 5/15/2009 6:42:00 AM
This is an excellent submission. I like the flow of the words and the message. Welcome to poetry Soup. ~Joseph
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Date: 4/28/2009 2:19:00 PM
Nice write Natalie, short and straight to the core, i like this one a lot. If you get a spare moment check out my holókauston, it has parts 1 and 2 as its a story with history attached, James,xx
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