The Holloween Master

Happy Halloween from the creator of sin Please open your mind and let me come in I have to say that I can stay for a short while I can teach you to hate : your heart to be vile I’ll show you atrocities you’ve never seen Enhancing your mind and soul : be unclean Just hold my hand; the burning eternal flame On this hollowed eve ; costumes spread my fame On this hollowed eve, your children speak MY name

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/10/2012 1:32:00 PM

WOW! Absolutely LOVED THIS ONE! Straight to my favs!!! <3 Always, Laura

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/8/2009 7:23:00 AM

Interesting ideas put to pen in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/25/2009 5:40:00 PM

just stirrin' up the soup, HG. I like to go poem window shopping . I like this one . This message is alot more real than people think. You brought it out very well.--in fact I don't know how it could have been said any better. tHANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP and wonderful encouragement, HG. I really do appreciate it.Such a tremendous boost to my desire to write. your friend, Robert

Date: 11/12/2009 12:49:00 PM

So fitting for the season. Good use of rhyme to convey your thoughts. Much captured in just nine lines. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comment on my poem. Have a nice day!!!! Karen

John Freeman

Date: 10/27/2009 7:50:00 AM

That's really what it does represent,HG. Good write, My friend. God bless, Sincerely, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/27/2009 4:45:00 AM

HG, what a awesome write. You have grown so much in your poetry writing. I always knew you could do it. You simply amaze me. Love you my forever friend, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 10/26/2009 6:25:00 PM

OOOOwwwwwweeeee. scarey. I was hoping you'd show me something else...smile. BG