The Hollow Tree

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" RECITING HISTORY " MY PHOTO, ©

Image may contain: plant, tree, outdoor and nature

The old tree
couldn't stand upright anymore.

Age, winds, and storms made it fold,
condemning it to stay close to 
the ground.

Its hollow trunk,
a pitiful sight one may think,
but it  
the history of the forest, unceasingly  
recites.

Oh, 
how many things Man could learn
if only 
he was willing to listen to its story!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
      07 July 2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/9/2020 9:06:00 AM
If he listens to his heart, he might listen to others...until then he's deaf.My take on the matter...Well done
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Date: 7/7/2020 10:50:00 AM
Love this one Demetrius. Wonderful piece..Blessings my friend...
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/7/2020 11:36:00 AM
Michael, my friend, a pleasure to see you again. Thank you! Blessings.
Date: 7/7/2020 6:53:00 AM
Man could learn much by simply listening--well said my friend.
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Date: 7/7/2020 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so much dearest, Vijay for kind visit and comment! Blessings
Date: 7/7/2020 6:48:00 AM
Sadly man is too blind or stupid to just open his eyes and open his ears to see what nature has to offer. Tom
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Date: 7/7/2020 11:33:00 AM
I could say it better dearest, Tom! Thank you for your precious visit, my friend. Blessings!
Date: 7/7/2020 4:00:00 AM
how many things Man could learn if only he was willing to listen!.. Nature is the best teacher available.. But mostly we ignore her free lessons.. Great write Demetrios..
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Date: 7/7/2020 11:31:00 AM
How right you are dearest, Jenish! Unfortunately, Man causes a lot of damage to nature! Thank you very much for lovely comment! Greetings
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