The Holiday Season

Our humanity
has become so transparent
we need a special day
to be reminded of it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Neumann Avatar
February 12, 2020 at 4:30 AM
That is so true. We have lots to learn. Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai
Dalei Avatar
October 1, 2016 at 1:07 AM
You are right, Timothy............//hugs
Austin Avatar
September 5, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Transparent indeed. Almost seeing into the nonexistent. Good stuff. Love, Dave
Dahlusion Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 11:41 AM
Thank you for this reminder. Looking forward ... ––))
Hicks Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Thanks Dah Lusion!
Hay Avatar
September 1, 2016 at 4:25 AM
The need to conform and be accepted often leave us feeling obliged. Straight to the point, well done, warm regards, Laura.
Hicks Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 5:15 PM
Thank you Laura for your visit and nice feedback!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Good morning Timothy.
Hamilton Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Well said Timothy, I only celebrate my wedding anniversary, and the death of my Lord. I try to remember all of my obligations to family and friends everyday, a very wise write in so few words. We are supposed to give from a cheerful heart not under obligation right? A fave and A7
Hicks Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Right you are my friend. Thanks for the 7 and the Fave!
Dahlusion Avatar
July 12, 2016 at 9:52 AM
Perfect wisdom! ––))
Hicks Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Thanks Dah Lusion!
Devnath  Avatar
June 30, 2016 at 12:48 PM
Excellently done simply i say. Your strength of inner spirit is clear here that you are a very true strong person. A great 7 my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Hicks Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:42 PM
Thanks a bunch Barja!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 11:23 PM
Some great comments, it seems you got people to thinking!
Hicks Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Thanks Rick!
Vaso Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 11:15 PM
If you need my birthday and address just ask! :) great write!
Hicks Avatar
August 31, 2016 at 3:25 PM
Hahaha ... thanks Arthur!
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 9:46 AM
just stopping by to see how you are, Timothy. How is the vendor business going?
Hicks Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Going pretty well. Hope you have a great fourth, Andrea!
Breidenthal Avatar
June 25, 2016 at 12:57 AM
Excellent one! Always very clever wording coming from you. I understand this all too well~Always, Laura
Hicks Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 10:55 AM
Thanks Laura! Not against holidays, per say, just don't like the obligatory "just going through the motions" feeling that I often get on certain holidays.
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 7:29 PM
So is there a holiday called "Human day"? Some certainly are NOT, like he guy who shot up Orlando!!
Hicks Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 10:39 AM
That Orlando situation was so sad to hear about :( ... I kinda wish they would stop talking about it so much ... at the risk of other psychos wanting to copy-cat ...
Hicks Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 11:24 PM
Very true, Paul! You understood this very well ...
Callus Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 11:49 AM
I suppose that is where we go wrong, Timothy! It is such a pity that we have to be made aware of our daily obligations by fixing 'special days' as reminders. ~ Regards // paul
Hicks Avatar
July 4, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Whoops ... looks like my comment jump-skipped again. You understood this very well, Paul
Thirtyseven Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:50 AM
I think there was a whole lot of stuff hiding behind what we get shown, myself.
Hicks Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 11:17 PM
Thanks Maurice. The "of it" refers to humanity. And yes, I'm enjoying the weather and the warm nights.
Rigoler Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:49 AM
More clarity would help here, my friend. What does "of it" refer to? Humanity or the holiday season? Maybe neither? Few of my humorous poems relate to me, rather an editorial "everyone." Truth is, I enjoy most all foods, even as a boy. Thanks for the stop by. Hope you're enjoying Georgian weather? / M
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Good morning Timothy.;0)
Hicks Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 11:02 PM
Thanks Richard! ... little late in my response, but thanks for the stop as always ... you are a very considerate person!
A  Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 11:18 PM
Timothy, YOU SAID IT WELL.. :) skat
Hicks Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Thanks SKAT ... haven't talked to you in a long time!
Devnath  Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 11:25 AM
Yes, i feel absolutely true. Very nicely penned with a few words. A beautiful 7. Loved always my lovely nice friend, bl
Hicks Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 10:50 PM
Thanks Barja!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 7:12 AM
I don't know if that is true, but it doesn't hurt to have a reminder from time to time.
Hicks Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 1:01 PM
A matter of perspective, I suppose ... this is a rather extreme viewpoint, but meant to make people think about the why of celebration. Reminders are nice, but sad when those days, few and far between, are celebrated merely out of obligation. Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts, my friend!
Allison Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 1:15 AM
dark humour Timothy lol - sure made me smile :-) hugs Jan xx
Hicks Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 12:47 PM
Dark humor is accurate! Thanks for the stop :)
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