The Hole

Joe is a rich moss-gathering celebrity, Not moving far from his plot of joy. Still he finds grief, hurt and chaos, In this hole which is so coy. Joe left this hole to find his family, Joe left this hole for somewhere to go, You see he's leaving for his freedom, You see he's leaving to find his show.

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2016 3:26:00 PM

Sounds like Joe lives a very chaotic write Jesse!:-) hugs Jan xx

Jesse Day
Date: 9/2/2016 10:47:00 AM

Yes ma'am! Thanks - Jesse

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/13/2016 7:10:00 PM

Like John below, I'm intrigued by this clever, crisp presentation about Joe. Is this Part 1? Maybe a current event that I missed? Any way, we're attentive! CayCay

Jesse Day
Date: 9/2/2016 10:46:00 AM

CayCay - not a bad idea. I'll put it on the burner! Thanks - Jesse

John Fleming

Date: 8/13/2016 1:11:00 PM

Who is this aging, publicity seeking, celebrity show-host, Jesse? Nevertheless - An interesting little poem! My best regards. :) john P.s A seven for the sheer intrigue.

Jesse Day
Date: 9/2/2016 10:45:00 AM

LOL! Thanks - just my alter ego! Jesse