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The Hive Mind Retribution

protuberance hot the sting of summersault sun beet red swarm of bees NA re-run Poetry Contest Sponsor - John Hamilton 6/18/2019 howmanysyllables.com 5/7/5 Tania Kitchin’s Poetry Contest - Birds or Bees Haiku *summersault is an alternate spelling

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/28/2019 9:11:00 AM

My nightmare!

Paul Callus

Date: 6/21/2019 12:12:00 PM

Your lovely poem projects a striking image, Kim; the combined sting of sun & bees produces 'red-hot' results. ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2019 7:51:00 AM

Thank you so much!! Hugs...Kim

Eve Roper

Date: 6/20/2019 10:04:00 PM

love the haiku, Kim, good luck. Summer does bring all breeds out.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2019 6:03:00 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/18/2019 3:46:00 PM

Oh, my gosh, my mind is running as hard and as fast as I can from this swarm of bees!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2019 9:18:00 PM

LOL!