Kim Rodrigues Poet Haiku

The Hive Mind Retribution

protuberance hot
the sting of summersault sun
beet red swarm of bees

NA re-run Poetry Contest
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6/18/2019
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Tania Kitchin’s Poetry Contest - Birds or Bees Haiku

*summersault is an alternate spelling

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Line Gauthier June 28, 2019 at 9:11 AM My nightmare!

Paul Callus June 21, 2019 at 12:12 PM Your lovely poem projects a striking image, Kim; the combined sting of sun & bees produces 'red-hot' results. ~ Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues June 22, 2019 at 7:51 AM Thank you so much!! Hugs...Kim

Eve Roper June 20, 2019 at 10:04 PM love the haiku, Kim, good luck. Summer does bring all breeds out. Kim Rodrigues June 21, 2019 at 6:03 AM Thank you, Eve!

Caren Krutsinger June 18, 2019 at 3:46 PM Oh, my gosh, my mind is running as hard and as fast as I can from this swarm of bees! Kim Rodrigues June 18, 2019 at 9:18 PM LOL!