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The Hill of Life {resubmit}

Think of life if you will As a big giant hill At the bottom there is a road Each of us start with a equal load Just as every up has a down There are forks in the road to be found At these forks I'm here to say The right road is a steeper way The wrong road without a doubt Is a little more flattened out Now the road of life is just so long Whether we do it right or wrong If in the beginning the right choices we make A steady incline our life will take And if we choose the wrong road We put on our back a heavy load In the beginning that may be fine But later in life we hit that incline And now we face a much steeper road Burdened by a much heavier load We live our lives it does seem Just trying to reach our dreams Intertwined by the ropes That thread together all our hopes Its simply up to you to choose Will I win or will I lose

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Date: 5/22/2010 4:04:00 PM
always a profound message in your words so beautifully expressed. congrats on your feature my dear friend. you are constantly with me, this I hope you know. have a beautiful weekend. love and hugs, shar xoxo
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Date: 5/19/2010 10:14:00 AM
Says so much about life. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Date: 5/19/2010 9:28:00 AM
Congrats Michael on your couplet "The Hill of Life" being featured. Vince
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Date: 5/18/2010 12:15:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 5/17/2010 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2010 10:20:00 PM
Hi there...congrats on being featured this week. I liked this the first time I read it. Hope you are doing well..finals over? BG
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Date: 9/8/2008 8:41:00 PM
a gentle piece of warm poetry. thank you for reading my a good steward and for your comment
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