The Highest Elevation of Love

The highest elevation of love,
I the soil ever nurturing,
You the stem ever sapping,
And sprouting our love into the sweet rose it is.
Never is it to wither under the bright sun,
Or drown from the rain of these jealous angels above.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Mehta Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 4:34 PM
Good metaphors and similes to convey your thoughts on the highest elevation of love, Guy
Falotico Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Excellent work...Now this is Poetry my friend...much enjoyed....Michael
Bowman-Palmer Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Deep
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace