Mike Dailey Poet Rhyme

The Hermit Card

The card that I got was the Hermit
And I’ve got a secret to share
Although I am a true Virgo
The virgin part isn’t still there
For I have this thing against women
This “thing”s not a virtuous thought
This “thing” is alive and willing
And oh all the trouble it’s brought
I don’t want to go into seclusion
But maybe it’s best that I did
For I finally reached the conclusion
That my “thing” don’t like to be hid
So maybe it’s best you don’t ask me
For guidance in relationships
For my thoughts may be inner directed
But they’re focused pretty much on your hips

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Debbie Guzzi December 7, 2012 at 6:49 PM Congrad's on your fine write winning high honors. Light & Love Mike Dailey December 8, 2012 at 6:41 AM Thanks Debbie, it sure is fun to win but mostly because of the congratulations you get from fellow poets.

Poet Destroyer A December 7, 2012 at 2:42 PM Mike :- ) Congratulations with your awesome poem in Tracie's "...Tarot Poem..." contest.. glad these are enjoyable winners.. take care~LINDA Mike Dailey December 8, 2012 at 6:43 AM Thanks Linda, getting compliments from great poets is the best part of these contests. I'm glad you liked my effort in this contest.

Carol Sunshine Brown December 7, 2012 at 11:36 AM Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's contest Mike. Love Carol Mike Dailey December 8, 2012 at 6:46 AM first place or 10th place - it doesn't matter as long as someone reads the poems and lets the poet know they have fans.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 7, 2012 at 1:42 AM Big congratulations Mike, still laughing here well done xx Mike Dailey December 7, 2012 at 7:57 AM Glad you liked it. Once I read what the card meant, I could not help but write it like I did.

Richard Lamoureux December 7, 2012 at 12:49 AM This is funny, well done! Congrats and thanks for the laugh. Mike Dailey December 7, 2012 at 8:01 AM Thanks Richard. I almost always go for the laugh - this world is too serious as it is. Mike

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 6, 2012 at 11:53 PM congrats mike on a dynamic write on the Hermit Tarot and a super win too luv .. how have u been??? Mike Dailey December 7, 2012 at 7:59 AM Thanks for the comment. I have been off the soup for awhile - still writing every day but just not posting like I used to. I hope to get back to posting and entering contests again.

Seren Roberts December 6, 2012 at 9:18 PM Lol. Well done Mike .....Seren Mike Dailey December 7, 2012 at 8:00 AM Glad you liked it - I couldn't help but laugh at what all the card stood for and I have trouble writing anything seerious so I had to go for the laugh. Mike Dailey December 7, 2012 at 7:59 AM