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The Here and Now

Orwell and Alinski both saw the 
here and now.
Sal, he wrote a manual,
George wrote a story bout a 
farmer and some pigs,
That both forgot to milk the 
cow
One went door to door
The other went high brow
Both told us what would 
happen 
Both also told us how
It was "radical" in "1984"
It's factual right now

Copyright © Kelly Crenshaw | Year Posted 2013

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/26/2016 9:05:00 AM I'm curious why one who is so skilled describes his work as feeble. This is a tremendous and well thought out first offering. Based on the skill and thought with which it is written I would say you have been writing a long time. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/9/2014 12:19:00 AM Kelly, Congratulation, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 2/7/2014 9:59:00 PM Hi Kelly; I just had to and read your first poem. I am glad I did. It is a great poem. I'm sorry that I messed up your name in the other poem. My vission now is not too good. Welcome to the Soup.... Lucilla Login to Reply Kelly Crenshaw Date: 2/7/2014 10:31:00 PM Thnx!! You didn't mess up my name!! lol I appreciate your kind words bout my feeble attempts at writing.

Nicole Rodriguez Date: 12/30/2013 4:23:00 PM Excellent message! People need to see the truth in fiction. I am under the impression that fiction is the best way to tell the truth...I am cautious of words which are insisted to be non-fictional. Login to Reply Kelly Crenshaw Date: 2/6/2014 11:22:00 PM Thank you very much!! Kelly Crenshaw Date: 12/30/2013 4:31:00 PM 8-) thnx!!

Skat A Date: 12/30/2013 1:57:00 PM Kelly, Hope you are enjoying the holidays, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, This is deep!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Kelly Crenshaw Date: 12/30/2013 3:45:00 PM Thnx for the encouragement! Nice to be here.

Peter Dome Date: 12/27/2013 8:29:00 PM Well done a great write, they were great visionaries that's for sure. take care, best wishes. Pete. more please. Login to Reply Kelly Crenshaw Date: 12/27/2013 8:50:00 PM Thnx man. Unless one has read rules for radicals, animal farm and 1984, it makes no sense. Lol I appreciate the encouragement.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/27/2013 3:41:00 PM Hi Kelly, i like the hear and now from your poem... 1984 was a radical time for me.. . Hope you had a wonderful Christmas with family. -, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Kelly Crenshaw Date: 12/27/2013 5:27:00 PM Thnx!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/27/2013 3:30:00 PM - Welcome to P-Soup, Kelly ! - Nice to read your first poem here. :)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kelly Crenshaw Date: 12/27/2013 5:28:00 PM Thnx, & happy new year!!!