John Lawless Poet Quatrain

The Heavens Acquiesced

The Heavens Acquiesced 


Bubbles rose on moonbeams glow
lost fairies trapped within
held prisoner on currents flow
by liquid walls so very thin

drifting in the moon blue sky
the captives of the light
danced within the bubbles skin
gave song to silent night

rose until the light of day
obscured by horizon’s crest
shone upon fine fairie wings
as the heavens acquiesced

found joy within the glowing orbs
hanging in the dark of space
peace within the fairy songs
soft filigree of moonlight lace

so do the fairies rise to height
orbed prisons without bars
drifting in the moon blue sky
fairies become the stars



6/17/2015

submitted to – FANTASY – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Mystic Rose

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Poet Destroyer A June 30, 2015 at 6:23 PM ooo... nice

Skat A June 28, 2015 at 12:21 AM John, Congrats on the fantasy win...... SKAT John Lawless June 28, 2015 at 6:28 AM Thanks SKAT for your continuing support

Richard Lamoureux June 27, 2015 at 7:41 AM Perfect! Congratulations on a fine win. John Lawless June 27, 2015 at 7:49 AM Thank you Richard for reading and commenting

Laura Leiser June 18, 2015 at 12:17 AM Your imagery really matches what I think Mystic Rose was portraying in her fantasy pictures, and it works! Very well written, and good luck in the contest :) John Lawless June 27, 2015 at 7:48 AM Thanks Laura for reading and commenting, always good to hear from you.