The Heavenly Lovers

The Heavenly Lovers

I saw two heavenly Lovers, 
Meeting like man and Woman, 
High in the sky. 
They were standing, 
Like two heavenly dwellers, 
Trying to understand each other. 

The wind was fast and cool, 
The Sun rays were touching their hairs;  
They met for few moments, 
As if, they knew that no one can Stay in this world too much. 
I was watching them intensely,
With A Camera in my hand.

I took their Photos, 
To tell the world that I have seen, 
The Lovers, who came from the other world. 
The beauty of their silent love gazing, 
Will continue to live in my mind,
Like the song of the immortal Love, 
But they vanished with the breeze
While floating on wind,     
Before anyone could have noticed.

Only I was left standing there, 
With a small camera in my hand.

I was trying to trace the foot prints of those Lovers
Who had vanished in the sky with the wind. 
Ravindra 
Kanpur India 12th Dec. 2010


NOTE:
This Poem is based on a true incident which I have
Captured in my Camera on 11th Dec. 2010 when I was 
In Lucknow, about 100km from Kanpur.
The Picture I took of these Heavenly Lovers I have placed
As MY PHOTOS MY POEMS on my face book.

. To see the Photo of the amazing lovers please copy the following web address and paste it in web address space after deleting the internet explorer address and enter. Exam. http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100001219732381#!/photo.php?fbid=147177711999552&set=a.114474218603235.25716.100001219732381
PLEASE DOUBLE CLICK ON THE PHOTO TO SEE ITS FULL SIZE VIEW AND EASY READING.

IMPORTANT  NOTE:   IN MY NEXT BLOG I WILL EXPLAIN HOW ANY OF YOU CAN WRITE A TEXT ON A PHOTO TO MAKE IT A PHOTO POEM.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/8/2011 11:30:00 AM
I am stopping by today to thank you so much for your kind comments and to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry Ravindra. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/23/2010 6:22:00 AM
This is stunning because the reader is not quite sure what you were looking at, but by comparing it to two lovers and describing the scene the way you did, we are left quite enchanted. I would like to see that photo, but with my mom visiting, I'm just hurrying to comment to as many poets as I can. NOt even time for the blogs today. Wonderful seeing your poetry . Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/22/2010 6:23:00 AM
Wow! It's amazing reading the story about two lovers. Once again you give me beauty to think of. Heaven reaching every star when a man and woman are smiling with love upon this world. Thank you so much for your. Encouraging word, I returned the soup mail. I saw I did not miss many of your dear poems. Have a wonderful day.. always P.D.
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Date: 12/15/2010 12:01:00 PM
Your poem reminds me of the many images we see in the constellations of stars at night, Ravindra. How wonderful you were able to capture "immortal love" with your camera. Beautifully written! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/12/2010 10:23:00 AM
Love the poem and the way you constructed it..great poetry my friend , and I will check out the photos... thanks for sharing...
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Date: 12/12/2010 10:22:00 AM
Hello Friends, After missing all my Poetry Soup friends in the last few days I am back again with a Poem and a Blog. Hope you would read my Blog also for giving your valuable suggestion on adding 'My Photo My Poems' as a powerful tool on PS. To this Photo Poem please check on my face book also. The above Poem is based on a true incident as you can see in picture also. Love and best wishes to all of you. Ravindra
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