The Heat of Passionate Spirits

In her eyes from across the room

our glances make a spark,

the magic in our eyes, unmistakable.

Upon a brief exchange of chance, something more leads us away from who we are, to a 

chemistry unspoken. The magic between us continues through the night as we softly 

tear down the walls of inhibition. The booth cradles us through obscurity as the wine with 

gentle sips warms our emotions.  Time does not exist, enchanted minutes and hours

become eternities.  Smiles and soft caresses of her arm, she lightly plays 

with her hair...each touch sparks our souls and pull us closer to the truth.  We are not 

making it out of this perfect night untouched. To a small back room alone holding hands, 

lovers stop abrupt. Slowly and passionately a gentle embrace lead slowly to 

the light touch of lips.  The moment engulfs the now with fervours magnitude.

The passion burns our shadows on the wall with volcanic lust, the paint 

sweats like rain. The flowers bloom fills the room with sweet celestial heat as the love in our

hearts race to warm culmination.  A perspirant palm print slams, leaving behind 

the fingerprints of our flames. Trembling love exchanges with eyes agaze with no cares of 

what's to come. The magic in our eyes at this moment would never come undone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/1/2010 11:33:00 PM
The volcanic part sounded like a trip on acid. Wow, really carried away. A very passionate write! thanks so much for your comments today. LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/1/2010 10:44:00 AM
romantic poem, enjoyed reading!
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:27:00 AM
Romantic and passionate as well as emotional.. appreciate your commenting on my poetry as well and keep looking on the contest page ..if your poem fits the guidelines feel free to enter.. it is both exciting and challenging to create a special poem for each new contest offered.. thankxxx...luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/1/2010 12:16:00 AM
This is fabulous. You should enter it into a contest. I really enoyed reading this piece it is very descriptive.
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