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The Hearts First Breaking

I fell to the ground, to bathe in starlight. That offers comfort, on a heartbroken night. You want to find her, and make her love you. Then accept your fate, when friends tell you true. The light of the stars, that auras my pain. Will lend me solace, till my sorrows wane. I search the night sky, with the question why! date:1/29/2022

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Date: 1/31/2022 8:27:00 PM
A beautiful lyrical sonnet. Interesting to read. Congratulations!
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Meru Groen
Date: 2/6/2022 4:22:00 PM
It happened a long time ago, thanks for the great comment, Alex, I appreciate it.

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